[libreoffice-marketing] Re: Brochure-type: General Information -- Updated to v.4 (still in edit stage by the marketing team)

Hi Tom,

Some good points ...

Le 10/05/13 12:42 PM, Tom Davies a écrit :
> Hi:)
> Looks fine!:)   Nice work there:)
>
> I was trying to think of a better way of saying
>
> "The LibreOfficeuser interfaceis available in many languages, even in languages for which cost of 
> localization for commercial software is not available.  "
> but i couldn't come up with anything that wasn't clunky in some other way.  Perhaps
>
> "The LibreOfficeuser interfaceis available in many languages.  Even languages which commercial software 
> can't afford to translate into."
> See what i mean?  Still clunky.

Yes, I think it is clunky, but I now realize that the is missing a "the" 
cost of localization ...". I will fix that.

I don't really mind the original sentence; it is to the point and clear. 
Most people will realize of whom we are criticizing.

> On the 2nd page in the 1s and 2nd columns the bulleted indents make the lining-up look a little 
> strange but on the 3rd column it looks fine.  Also a lot of words got split at the end of sentences 
> but nothing can be done about that.

Yeh ... I could try to move the "Exchange Data to the first panel and 
then the bulleted list to the middle panel. Have a look at this and let 
me know what you think:

http://www.parentreprise.com/images/LibreOffice/JuggledColumnsBrochurev4.0GeneralInformation.png

How does this look and how does the flow of text work?

> The really weird thing was when i opened the A4 in 4.0.0 the formatting looked really messed-up 
> with the far left column on 1st page clearly jumping up through the column header.  However when i 
> clicked into the document it all jumped back down again and looked great.  Same thing happened with 
> the US letter sized one.  So, if it happens to you just give it a minute to fix itself.  I've been 
> thinking about upgrading to 4.0.3 quite soon anyway, hopefully this weekend.  It could just be 
> something weird in my settings or anything.  This machine has been unhappy for a while now and 
> needs some tlc.

I wouldn't worry about that, I think it's the way the page is drawn 
first and then the frames are laid on top. There is just a slight redraw 
needed for the change.

> Regards from
>
> Tom:)


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