Re: [libreoffice-marketing] Re: Brochure-type: General Information -- Updated to v.4 (still in edit stage by the marketing team)

Hi :)
Errr, what i meant was that if you draw a line through all the bullet-points on the 2nd page then 
in the 1st 2 panels the line cuts right into the middle of the other text on the page.  It might 
look better if those bullet-points could be moved so that a line drawn through them would cut 
through the first letter on each line

For example
      *  This 'bullet point' is probably indented quite far
*  this 'bullet point' lines up with the text in the rest of the email.


More text would make it even more prone to tl;dr
Regards from 
Tom :)  





> ________________________________
> From: Marc Paré <marc@marcpare.com>
> To: marketing@global.libreoffice.org 
> Sent: Friday, 10 May 2013, 22:03
> Subject: [libreoffice-marketing] Re: Brochure-type: General Information -- Updated to v.4 (still 
> in edit stage by the marketing team)
>
>
> Hi Tim
>
> Le 10/05/13 03:56 PM, Kracked_P_P---webmaster a écrit :
> > If we can reduce the left hand side spacing of the bullets from the side
> > of the "frame" and reduce the spacing from the bullet to the text, THEN
> > we might be able to increase the amount of text, somewhat, or help with
> > the text formatting from line to line.
> >
> > What it will finally look like will depend on whether you are using
> > Letter or A4 paper.  But anything to reduce the unneeded spacing on
> > either side of the bullets would help with the look of the brochure.
> >
> > As the contend is changed, for the better, I have been replacing the
> > older version of the Community brochure on my DVD and web site with the
> > newer and better ones.  Right now, I will list the Letter Paper version,
> > but later I will include the A4 version as well.
>
> I think the problem Tom was talking about was the fact that the top of 
> the centre panel looked a little bare and out of place. We have the list 
> starting on the left panel and then following on the centre panel.
>
> What do you think of the version (.png)[1] that I posted? Do you think 
> it looks better if we put the whole list on the centre panel? I have 
> posted the same as an .odt file for people to print if they want to look 
> at a concrete example.[2]
>
> Cheers
>
> Marc
>
> [1] 
> http://www.parentreprise.com/images/LibreOffice/JuggledColumnsBrochurev4.0GeneralInformation.png
>
> [2] 
> http://www.parentreprise.com/images/LibreOffice/JuggledColumnsBrochurev4.0GeneralInformation.odt
>
>
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