On Sat, May 11, 2013 at 11:06 AM, Jean Weber <jeanweber@gmail.com> wrote:
Apologies for not having got to the brochure earlier. Comments: * It would look a lot better if automatic hyphenation were turned off. If some hyphenation is essential to make all the text fit in the space available, use conditional hyphenation. * There are some between-word spacing errors in the A4 version that are obviously caused by many extra spaces having been added (probably at the ends of lines in the USLtr version. These extra spaces need to be removed. * I have a LOT of suggestions for improvements in wording as well as a few punctuation corrections. I think the easiest way to handle this is for me to edit the file and create my version for everyone's consideration. I'll do that and upload to the wiki and post the links here. --Jean
Files here: ODT https://wiki.documentfoundation.org/File:LibreOfficeV.4.0.x-CommunityBrochure-GeneralInformation-A4_JHW.odt https://wiki.documentfoundation.org/File:LibreOfficeV.4.0.x-CommunityBrochure-GeneralInformation-USLtr_JHW.odt PDF https://wiki.documentfoundation.org/File:LibreOfficeV.4.0.x-CommunityBrochure-GeneralInformation-A4_JHW.pdf https://wiki.documentfoundation.org/File:LibreOfficeV.4.0.x-CommunityBrochure-GeneralInformation-USLtr_JHW.pdf Apologies for lack of change tracking. --Jean -- To unsubscribe e-mail to: marketing+unsubscribe@global.libreoffice.org Problems? http://www.libreoffice.org/get-help/mailing-lists/how-to-unsubscribe/ Posting guidelines + more: http://wiki.documentfoundation.org/Netiquette List archive: http://listarchives.libreoffice.org/global/marketing/ All messages sent to this list will be publicly archived and cannot be deleted