Re: [libreoffice-marketing] Brochure-type: General Information

Hi :)
+1
Bullet-points are still oddly indented.  Almost all the split words have been fixed though.  Only 
about 4 remaining and even those are split in more logical places.  

Please can we change the Base wording from
"Base can also be used as a front-end ..."
to something like
"Base is best when  used as a front-end ..."
or even better
"Base
is a  front-end..." 

Just out of curiosity who would handle a court action against TDF?  At the moment the Users List 
handles the problems  carefully to avoid such action occurring to people but so far it's just been 
down to luck that people haven't tried to start proceedings against us.  The current wording 
effectively states that the intended usage of Base is with it using the internal back-end and that  
is known to have caused data-loss and other problems.  


The sentence about languages is tons better.  It looks smooooth now :)  The rest felt smoother but 
other problems had not really jumped out at me before so all i noticed there was that the splitting 
of words had been dramatically minimised.  


Superb work Jean, as always! :)
Thanks and regards from 

Tom :)  





> ________________________________
> From: Kracked_P_P---webmaster <webmaster@krackedpress.com>
> To: marketing@global.libreoffice.org 
> Sent: Saturday, 11 May 2013, 7:26
> Subject: Re: [libreoffice-marketing] Brochure-type: General Information
>
>
> On 05/10/2013 11:08 PM, Jean Weber wrote:
> > On Sat, May 11, 2013 at 11:06 AM, Jean Weber <jeanweber@gmail.com> wrote:
> > > Apologies for not having got to the brochure earlier. Comments:
> > > * It would look a lot better if automatic hyphenation were turned off.
> > > If some hyphenation is essential to make all the text fit in the space
> > > available, use conditional hyphenation.
> > > * There are some between-word spacing errors in the A4 version
> > > that are obviously caused by many extra spaces having been added
> > > (probably at the ends of lines in the USLtr version.
> > > These extra spaces need to be removed.
> > > * I have a LOT of suggestions for improvements in wording as well as a
> > > few punctuation corrections. I think the easiest way to handle this is
> > > for me to edit the file and create my version for everyone's consideration.
> > > I'll do that and upload to the wiki and post the links here.
> > >
> > > --Jean
> > Files here:
> >
> > ODT
> > https://wiki.documentfoundation.org/File:LibreOfficeV.4.0.x-CommunityBrochure-GeneralInformation-A4_JHW.odt
> > https://wiki.documentfoundation.org/File:LibreOfficeV.4.0.x-CommunityBrochure-GeneralInformation-USLtr_JHW.odt
> >
> > PDF
> > https://wiki.documentfoundation.org/File:LibreOfficeV.4.0.x-CommunityBrochure-GeneralInformation-A4_JHW.pdf
> > https://wiki.documentfoundation.org/File:LibreOfficeV.4.0.x-CommunityBrochure-GeneralInformation-USLtr_JHW.pdf
> >
> > Apologies for lack of change tracking.
> >
> > --Jean
>
> Thanks Jean
> Your letter size looks better to me.

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