Re: [libreoffice-marketing] Re: Need help with EN text and improving it

Hi :)
Wow!!  Thanks :)  Yes, i do prefer your new way.  How about the 1st paragraph to something like

"
Due to the ever increasing popularity of the free office suite, we receive a 
lot of support requests every day.  So, we cannot reply 
personally to every e-mail.  Much of the  engagement in the project is 
voluntary, either donated by companies or individuals.    
"  
or keep as you had it.  I think my change lost something.  
Regards from
Tom :)  






> ________________________________
> From: Florian Effenberger <floeff@documentfoundation.org>
> To: marketing@global.libreoffice.org 
> Sent: Wednesday, 21 November 2012, 18:00
> Subject: Re: [libreoffice-marketing] Re: Need help with EN text and improving it
>
> Hi Tom,
>
> Tom Davies wrote on 2012-11-21 12:35:
> > Please can the promises that other people will do the work for you be changed?
> > "A member of our mailing list will then respond and try to address the details of your inquiry."
> > Perhaps say
> > "Members of our mailing list are keen to solve interesting problems and will hopefully help 
> > guide you to ways of solving your issues."
>
> indeed, good point. Attached is an edited version, let me know what you think:
>
> Hello,
>
> thank you very much for your e-mail and interest in LibreOffice.
>
> Due to the increasing popularity of the free office suite, we receive a lot of support requests 
> every day. Unfortunately, we cannot reply personally to every e-mail, as our engagement in the 
> project is mostly voluntary and restricted to our spare time.
>
> However, the community does offer a large variety of mailing lists to support its users. We have 
> compiled an overview at http://www.libreoffice.org/get-help/mailing-lists/
>
> Please have a look at these pages, and send your inquiry to the applicable mailing list. Chances 
> are that other users of LibreOffice and community members will then respond and try to address the 
> details of your inquiry.
>
> Thank you for your understanding and have fun with LibreOffice,
>
> Florian
>
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