[us-marketing] Re: phamphlet for inside NA-DVD tall case

Hi Tim, Drew et al:

Le 2011-05-19 08:36, drew a écrit :
> On Thu, 2011-05-19 at 06:03 -0400, Marc Paré wrote:
> > Le 2011-05-17 19:25, drew a écrit :
> > > On Mon, 2011-05-16 at 15:34 -0400, Marc Paré wrote:
> > > > Le 2011-05-16 08:12, drew a écrit :
> > > > > On Mon, 2011-05-16 at 03:33 -0400, drew wrote:
> > > > > > Howdy,
> > > > > >
> > > > > > Uploaded a submission of a tri-fold pamphlet for use inside the tall
> > > > > > disc case.
> > >
> > > Hi Marc, Tim, others
> > >
> > > Just uploaded latest copy, with changes from your email
> > >
> > > > > > http://wiki.documentfoundation.org/cgi_img_auth.php/8/86/Na-dvd-insert.pdf
> > Hi Drew
> >
> > I can't open the .pdf. There seems to be a problem with it.
>
> Hi Marc,
>
> Still having problems - it opens fine for me - anyone else having a
> problem?
>
> Anyway, Marc if you have  problem I'll send you a copy directly.
>
> //drew

Weird, I am still getting an error message: "Une erreur est survenue 
lors du traitement d'une page. ColorSpace incorrect." yet all of the 
other .pdf files that I have still open with no problems.

Anyway, it loads with Okular.

Drew, thanks for the changes on the pamphlet. The added image of the 3 
icons with website links(p.1 panel 3) looks great!

Comments:

p.1 panel 1

“browse” through its content.  Also, you may just use your
file manager [Windows Explorer in Windows] to browse
the contents of the DVD and run/view the files directly
from there.



*** correct spelling of "through". The sentence "Also, you pay ... from 
there." suggests a list. So end it with "Also, you pay ... from there, 
to:" and then bullet form the list (below) ***

* Use the DVD with your web page browser:
* Insert the DVD into your DVD drive.
* Browse that drive and find the file name of “index.html”.
* Right­click the file name and open it into your default web
page browser.

p. 1 panel 3

* The second tpe are compressed/archived ... included].

*** start with the word "The" to match the same format as the templates 
section and it sounds strange without "The"

p2. panel 3

*** Could we try to coordinate this panel on all pamphlets: Trifold 
brochure and NA DVD pamphlet? I would suggest moving the following:

LibreOffice
The Document Foundation

Multi-Language Office Suite for
Microsoft Windows
GNU/Linux
Mac OSX

(NA globe)

trademark blurb

Note that this may mean resizing the scatter at the top of that panel


For the Trifold pamphlet do the same, but obviously without the NA 
globe. ***


Cheers

Marc







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