Re: [us-marketing] Re: NA-DVD Insert ( was:SYS - requirements

On 05/04/2011 05:52 AM, Marc Paré wrote:
> Hi Drew
>
> Le 2011-05-02 11:18, drew a écrit :
>
> > Hi,
> >
> > Alright - well, I formated a full tabloid page size - 3 columns.
> >
> > Decided to put more stuff in, so we can start to edit out.
> >
> > All the text in this file came from websites (TDF.org, Libo.org,
> > Libo-na.us) just very very little editing.
> >
> > The second page, full right side is the front cover - this is just
> > placeholder graphics, but I did make a new globe..
> >
> > The second page center panel - I think that is close to finished - as
> > one panel.
> >
> > All the rest, has to fit in the 4 remaining panels.
> >
> > So, this is just 90 minutes of work, and I'll put it down till tonight
> > http://lo-portal.us/temp/na-vd-insert-en.pdf
> >
> > [that is a Hybrid file BTW, meaning you can open for edit in LibO]
> > (although the odt is sitting next to it, also)
> >
> >
> > Thanks
> >
> > Drew
>
> Sorry for getting on this and commenting a little late on insert.
>
> * on the globe. Please remove the "e" from "Française", it should read 
> "Français"
>
> * as this is an insert, p.1 (Contact Us panel), there are many 
> weblinks without properly written URL. The URL's need to be written 
> out. Example: Facebook section "a group", "fan page" need to be 
> replaced by their respective URL's.
>
> * p. 1, section: Why are we calling yourselves "The Document 
> Foundation" -- I would suggest either modifying "For ten years" to 
> "For over ten years" or "In the past". Otherwise, the word "ten" will 
> have to be modified to "eleven" next year and "twelve" the next year 
> etc. We can make this affirmation less based on a number of years to 
> avoid having to update the insert on a yearly basis.
>
> * p. 1, section: "Why are calling the software "LibreOffice" instead 
> of "OpenOffice.org?" I think the answer is now out-dated. I think the 
> official line is that the LibreOffice name is here to stay and 
> OpenOffice.org is no longer a consideration. We had hope to get and 
> use the OpenOffice.org name. Anyway, this needs to be updated. Italo 
> could help with this, so that we get the official line on this answer.
>
> * p. 1, section: "Why are you building a new web infrastructure?" The 
> answer needs to be redone and the word "today" removed.
>
> * p. 1, section: "What does this announcement mean to other derivative 
> of OpenOffice.org? The answer section: "We are delighted" needs 
> updating from "will be merged" to "have been merged".
>
> * p. 2, second panel, links URL should be typed in (similar to the p. 
> 1, 1st panel)
>
> * p. 3, second panel. There is spacing problems for the "For certain 
> features of ... for Base." Not sure but it looks like you should 
> remove and empty line.
>
> Note: sorry, if I missed this, but where is this insert going?
>
> Thanks for the excellent work.
>
> Cheers
>
> Marc
The original need was to have some insert for the inside of the DVD.
Think Movie DVD insert that hold info on the DVD you just bought.

This insert was to do the following:
        1]  Tell people how to use this DVD
        2]  Tell what is on the DVD
        3]  Give info on system resources needed
        4]  Give more info about LibreOffice and the NA project.

That is how I pictured it.

The actual size has to be able to fit into the DVD case so the height 
cannot be larger than 7 inches.




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