[us-marketing] Re: NA-DVD Insert ( was:SYS - requirements

Hi Drew

Le 2011-05-02 11:18, drew a écrit :

> Hi,
>
> Alright - well, I formated a full tabloid page size - 3 columns.
>
> Decided to put more stuff in, so we can start to edit out.
>
> All the text in this file came from websites (TDF.org, Libo.org,
> Libo-na.us) just very very little editing.
>
> The second page, full right side is the front cover - this is just
> placeholder graphics, but I did make a new globe..
>
> The second page center panel - I think that is close to finished - as
> one panel.
>
> All the rest, has to fit in the 4 remaining panels.
>
> So, this is just 90 minutes of work, and I'll put it down till tonight
> http://lo-portal.us/temp/na-vd-insert-en.pdf
>
> [that is a Hybrid file BTW, meaning you can open for edit in LibO]
> (although the odt is sitting next to it, also)
>
>
> Thanks
>
> Drew

Sorry for getting on this and commenting a little late on insert.

* on the globe. Please remove the "e" from "Française", it should read 
"Français"

* as this is an insert, p.1 (Contact Us panel), there are many weblinks 
without properly written URL. The URL's need to be written out. Example: 
Facebook section "a group", "fan page" need to be replaced by their 
respective URL's.

* p. 1, section: Why are we calling yourselves "The Document Foundation" 
-- I would suggest either modifying "For ten years" to "For over ten 
years" or "In the past". Otherwise, the word "ten" will have to be 
modified to "eleven" next year and "twelve" the next year etc. We can 
make this affirmation less based on a number of years to avoid having to 
update the insert on a yearly basis.

* p. 1, section: "Why are calling the software "LibreOffice" instead of 
"OpenOffice.org?" I think the answer is now out-dated. I think the 
official line is that the LibreOffice name is here to stay and 
OpenOffice.org is no longer a consideration. We had hope to get and use 
the OpenOffice.org name. Anyway, this needs to be updated. Italo could 
help with this, so that we get the official line on this answer.

* p. 1, section: "Why are you building a new web infrastructure?" The 
answer needs to be redone and the word "today" removed.

* p. 1, section: "What does this announcement mean to other derivative 
of OpenOffice.org? The answer section: "We are delighted" needs updating 
from "will be merged" to "have been merged".

* p. 2, second panel, links URL should be typed in (similar to the p. 1, 
1st panel)

* p. 3, second panel. There is spacing problems for the "For certain 
features of ... for Base." Not sure but it looks like you should remove 
and empty line.

Note: sorry, if I missed this, but where is this insert going?

Thanks for the excellent work.

Cheers

Marc


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