[libreoffice-design] Re: [en] NA-Comm-DVD Label

Le 2011-04-21 10:34, drew a écrit :
> On Thu, 2011-04-21 at 10:30 -0400, Marc Paré wrote:
> > Le 2011-04-20 21:20, drew a écrit :
> > > Hi,
> > >
> > > One more change to the label for the NA-Comm-DVD.
> > >
> > > Addressed some concerns on trademark, from the US mktg ml.
> > >
> > > Swapped SVG logo for one a bit more descriptive and moved a few things
> > > around, per Marc's comments.
> > >
> > > Removed overall green frame, except spine and updated the scatter
> > > element to give it much more prominence.
> > >
> > > Softened the sactter-esque watermark on back cover, and adjusted other
> > > elements.
> > >
> > > Updated the file on the wiki:
> > > http://wiki.documentfoundation.org/Existing_Designs#Case
> > >
> > > Thanks
> > >
> > > Drew
> >
> > Thanks for update Drew. I was just wondering, what is the purpose of the
> > black dot under "English". Should this be erased?
>
> huh - a beauty mark perhaps...*chuckle*...yeah, will excise that.

Thanks again for the excellent work on the label. Looks great! It will 
make for a great template for other groups if they wish to adopt the 
same label. I really like the scatter on the label

The only other criticism I would have is the slogan. I would suggest 
moving the slogan moved beneath the LibreOffice title on the back page. 
I am not sure if the marketing team has chosen an official slogan as of 
yet, but this slogan seems to be the most quoted slogan from the list. 
It does seem to exemplify our collective understanding of our distro.

It just seems to me that from a readability point of view that a user 
would read LibreOffice -> Freedom Never Tasted So Suite more easily than 
Freedom Never Tasted So Suite -> LibreOffice. It may also look a little 
more presentable with the larger title of LibreOffice first followed by 
the slogan underneath it.

(icon) LibreOffice

Freedom Never Tasted
 So Suite!

What do you think?

Marc


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