Re: [libreoffice-website] LibreOffice-Extensions-Template-Website

Le 2011-06-19 11:43, drew a écrit :
> On Sun, 2011-06-19 at 16:53 +0200, Italo Vignoli wrote:
> > On 6/19/11 4:38 PM, drew wrote:
> >
> > > With a 'link to' as proposed by Andrea and a minor edit by me, are there any further editing 
> > > suggestions?
> > I am fine with the text.
> Well, you were totally correct, IMO, on catching the word permissive as
> being a problem BTW.
>
> Reading it I can't help but feel it's a bit wordy here and there.
> Looking at the way I worded 'adding and removing' in the second
> paragraph seems a bit awkward.
>
> Anyway - Andreas request was for a first draft and as that, a first
> draft, I think this is pretty good - not to mention others likely will
> come along (or back) and make it better.
>
> So let's call it good and hit the golf course, huh? :-)
>
> //drew

Thanks everyone. Looks good to me also. The licensing issue in the text 
seems right also.

Let us know once its on the site and we'll take another quick look at it.

Cheers

Marc

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