Re: [libreoffice-design] Re: [en] NA-Comm-DVD Label

Hi Drew -- Sorry, I had originally only posted to the US-Marketing but 
re-sent it to all the lists you have posted

Le 2011-04-22 11:25, drew a écrit :
> On Thu, 2011-04-21 at 11:10 -0400, Marc Paré wrote:
> > Le 2011-04-21 10:34, drew a écrit :
> > > On Thu, 2011-04-21 at 10:30 -0400, Marc Paré wrote:
> > > > Le 2011-04-20 21:20, drew a écrit :
> > > > > Hi,
> > > > >
> > > > > One more change to the label for the NA-Comm-DVD.
> > > > >
> > > > > Addressed some concerns on trademark, from the US mktg ml.
> > > > >
> > > > > Swapped SVG logo for one a bit more descriptive and moved a few things
> > > > > around, per Marc's comments.
> > > > >
> > > > > Removed overall green frame, except spine and updated the scatter
> > > > > element to give it much more prominence.
> > > > >
> > > > > Softened the sactter-esque watermark on back cover, and adjusted other
> > > > > elements.
> > > > >
> > > > > Updated the file on the wiki:
> > > > > http://wiki.documentfoundation.org/Existing_Designs#Case
> > > > >
> > > > > Thanks
> > > > >
> > > > > Drew
> > > >
> > > > Thanks for update Drew. I was just wondering, what is the purpose of the
> > > > black dot under "English". Should this be erased?
> > >
> > > huh - a beauty mark perhaps...*chuckle*...yeah, will excise that.
> >
> > Thanks again for the excellent work on the label. Looks great! It will
> > make for a great template for other groups if they wish to adopt the
> > same label. I really like the scatter on the label
> >
> > The only other criticism I would have is the slogan. I would suggest
> > moving the slogan moved beneath the LibreOffice title on the back page.
>
> <snip>
>
> > What do you think?
>
> Hi Marc,
>
> Did that, and the slogan just kept wanting to move south...so I
> accommodated it.
>
> After that, it just yelled at me to do something with the front...so I
> listened again.
>
> Finally, the ODF logo screamed so I borrowed from here and there, did a
> little aggregating and a little touch with the airbrush tool and
> well..see for yourself.
>
> http://wiki.documentfoundation.org/Existing_Designs#Case
>
> The source file is at:
> http://lo-portal.us/temp/na-dvd-case-04-11-22c.xcf
>
> "What do you think?" ->  I think this is looking damned good now, thanks
> to all feedback. Also, that I need to move on to a jewel case layout.
>
> Best wishes,
>
> Drew

Nice work. I like the placement of the slogan! After having read the 
functions of the modules, people get that extra slogan to motivate the 
use of the product!

Not sure if I like the placement of the two logos on the front cover. I 
think, strategically speaking, that all logos (pdf, odf, svg, cc by--SA, 
lgpl) would be better kept on the back. This is where the supporting 
information is situated. I also prefer the "Windows is a registered ... 
Apple Inc." at the back below the 5 logos and the "LibreOffice ... 
www.documentfoundation.org" on the front, as this gives us some 
additional advertisement for the TDF. The trademark assertions for 
Windows and Apple are there to satisfy the mention of the trademark 
names and I don't think we need to give it more prominence than it 
needs. We need to make people aware of the TDF rather than relegating it 
to second position on the back cover.

Cheers

Marc

--
Unsubscribe instructions: E-mail to design+help@libreoffice.org
Posting guidelines + more: http://wiki.documentfoundation.org/Netiquette
List archive: http://listarchives.libreoffice.org/www/design/
All messages sent to this list will be publicly archived and cannot be deleted