Re: [us-marketing] Updated tri-fold brocure

On Sun, 2011-05-15 at 19:33 -0700, C. Olofson wrote:
> On 05/15/2011 06:44 PM, drew wrote:
> > On Sun, 2011-05-15 at 21:11 -0400, drew wrote:
> > > Hi,
> > >
> > > Uploaded, to the wiki, the updated Tri-Fold brochure
> > >
> > >
> > > http://wiki.documentfoundation.org/cgi_img_auth.php/1/14/LibO-TriFild-Pamphlet-11-05-15-ltr-en.pdf
> > >
> > > Comments, more suggestions welcomed.
> > and - forgot to mention this here (did on the mktg list)
> >
> > For BSD what I did was to add a secondary line for platforms on the
> > interior listing. (1st column page 2)
> >
> > For the front panel I stayed with the three platforms listed on the
> > download page at libo/tdf sites.
> >
> > Does that seem reasonable?
> I would say that consistency trumps platforms, for now.  Consider 
> removing the *BSD reference until it's reflected community-wide.  All of 
> this is highly subjective and, I can't see this as a major thing but, 
> KISS (keep it simple silly).  Stick to the three predominate platforms 
> in all of our literature until we've built a bigger community consensus 
> on this.

Alright - Marc brings up the same point also, so updated the file at
http://wiki.documentfoundation.org/cgi_img_auth.php/1/14/LibO-TriFild-Pamphlet-11-05-15-ltr-en.pdf

Removed that second line for platforms for now.

> By the way, I appreciate the 'GNU' in 'GNU/Linux'.  ;-)
>
> As far as the rest; on the center column, internal page:
> > There are no license fees, and thus no
> > administrative burden is necessary.
> > Install LibreOffice as often and
> > wherever you want.
>
> You should look at re-writing this to fit the rest in the list: start 
> the sentence with 'LibreOffice' (and look at bolding all instance of 
> LibreOffice maybe).

Did go ahead and do the bold - did not re-write the copy, yet, but yes I
think you are right and it could use some changes. (next turn on the
wheel for that) If anyone wants to offer a change to a particular
paragraph(s) please do.

The working file with this mornings changes can be found here:
http://lo-portal.us/temp/LibOPamphlet-may-17.odt

Thanks

Drew


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