[us-marketing] Re: Updated tri-fold brocure

Hi Drew and Craig:

Le 2011-05-15 22:33, C. Olofson a écrit :
> On 05/15/2011 06:44 PM, drew wrote:
> > On Sun, 2011-05-15 at 21:11 -0400, drew wrote:
> > > Hi,
> > >
> > > Uploaded, to the wiki, the updated Tri-Fold brochure
> > >
> > >
> > > http://wiki.documentfoundation.org/cgi_img_auth.php/1/14/LibO-TriFild-Pamphlet-11-05-15-ltr-en.pdf
> > >
> > >
> > > Comments, more suggestions welcomed.
> > and - forgot to mention this here (did on the mktg list)
> >
> > For BSD what I did was to add a secondary line for platforms on the
> > interior listing. (1st column page 2)
> >
> > For the front panel I stayed with the three platforms listed on the
> > download page at libo/tdf sites.
> >
> > Does that seem reasonable?
> I would say that consistency trumps platforms, for now. Consider
> removing the *BSD reference until it's reflected community-wide. All of
> this is highly subjective and, I can't see this as a major thing but,
> KISS (keep it simple silly). Stick to the three predominate platforms in
> all of our literature until we've built a bigger community consensus on
> this.

I would also vote on not including BSD at this time as we have not as 
yet had anyone from the dev list comment re: dev support of BSD nor do 
we have anyone from the community who have come back to the list to say 
that they are using it. As for the claim of "other systems", I find this 
too vague -- we should not put this on the pamphlet.

> As far as the rest; on the center column, internal page:
> > There are no license fees, and thus no
> > administrative burden is necessary.
> > Install LibreOffice as often and
> > wherever you want.
>
> You should look at re-writing this to fit the rest in the list: start
> the sentence with 'LibreOffice' (and look at bolding all instance of
> LibreOffice maybe).

I also agree with starting this with "LibreOffice has no license fees 
...". If fits the pattern.

The scatter looks great on the pamphlet. Thanks for the work.

Cheers

Marc


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