Re: [us-marketing] Updated tri-fold brocure

On 05/15/2011 06:44 PM, drew wrote:
> On Sun, 2011-05-15 at 21:11 -0400, drew wrote:
> > Hi,
> >
> > Uploaded, to the wiki, the updated Tri-Fold brochure
> >
> >
> > http://wiki.documentfoundation.org/cgi_img_auth.php/1/14/LibO-TriFild-Pamphlet-11-05-15-ltr-en.pdf
> >
> > Comments, more suggestions welcomed.
> and - forgot to mention this here (did on the mktg list)
>
> For BSD what I did was to add a secondary line for platforms on the
> interior listing. (1st column page 2)
>
> For the front panel I stayed with the three platforms listed on the
> download page at libo/tdf sites.
>
> Does that seem reasonable?
I would say that consistency trumps platforms, for now.  Consider 
removing the *BSD reference until it's reflected community-wide.  All of 
this is highly subjective and, I can't see this as a major thing but, 
KISS (keep it simple silly).  Stick to the three predominate platforms 
in all of our literature until we've built a bigger community consensus 
on this.

By the way, I appreciate the 'GNU' in 'GNU/Linux'.  ;-)

As far as the rest; on the center column, internal page:
> There are no license fees, and thus no
> administrative burden is necessary.
> Install LibreOffice as often and
> wherever you want.

You should look at re-writing this to fit the rest in the list: start 
the sentence with 'LibreOffice' (and look at bolding all instance of 
LibreOffice maybe).

This really smacks of a professional-yet-living document.  There's more 
I could comment on but, I have to hold off until later.  Regardless, 
this represents the product & community really well.

Solid work.

Best
-Craig

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