[us-marketing] Re: [libreoffice-design] LibreOffice Tri-Fold Pamphlet for SCALE ( was Re: Re: LibreOffice Pamphlet)

Le 2011-02-10 03:45, drew a écrit :
> Hi,
>
> Well over an early coffee, I went ahead and merged Italo's comments into
> Marc's latest on the wiki, and added one more graphic - thought maybe an
> actual logo, the contemporary style might be nice, and it balances out
> the columns when opened wide, IMO.
>
> So draft 3 for the show specific pamphlet:
>
> http://baseanswers.com/libo/LibOPamphlet_scale_9x_b.pdf
>
> @marc do would you want another odt file, or just the changed/added png
> files?
>
> Thanks
>
> Drew
Hi Drew:

I was just about to correct my .odt file. Why don't you hang on to the 
.odt and we will now funnel our edits to you. You now have the ball.

We should ALL have one last read and then, once we are all agreed to the 
final product, we could leave a SCALE .odt copy on the wiki AND a copy 
WITHOUT the SCALE logo for people to use for other conferences. I can 
reference these files in the "Conference Kit" wiki page[1] as available 
tools.

Nice job with the icons and logos. Gives it a professional look.

Here are some more suggested edits:

Draw section:
* "... general posters, and more." REMOVE THE COMMA --should read: 
"general posters and more."

Macros Scripting section:
* should it not be: Macro Scripting  ???

The Libre Office Project section
* the gap after "community of users " is too large. Either try to 
hyphenate "contri- butors" to kick it up a line, or remove the word 
"large". In general, we should try to avoid hyphenation if possible.

LibreOffice Has Many Advantages section:
* "... mail merge, database, and much more." REMOVE THE COMMA --should 
read: "... mail merge, database and much more."

* "There are no license fees, and thus no" ... ADD COMMA -- should read: 
... "There are no license fees, and thus, no ..."

Exchange Data With Other Suites section
* The gap after " ... Commission and many" is too large. I don't think 
you have any other choice than to hyphenate "govern- ments" at this 
point to close the gap.

* The gap after "formats of many other ... " is too large. REMOVE THE 
BLANK SPACE after "many other" and this should fix the gap problem.

LibreOffice in Everyday Life section:
* I think we should treat each line as a title. Maybe these will later 
correspond to similar sections on the main website.

* "Education (teachers and students)" CAPITALIZE "Educate (Teachers and 
Students)"
*  "Authorities and public administrations" CAPITALIZE "Authorities and 
Public Administrations"

Cheers

Marc

[1] http://wiki.documentfoundation.org/Marketing/ConferenceKit


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