[libreoffice-website] Re: [Bug 54478] New: Clarity & Grammar issue on front page of LibreOffice.org

Le 2012-11-03 13:26, bugzilla-daemon@freedesktop.org a écrit :
> https://bugs.freedesktop.org/show_bug.cgi?id=54478
>
>            Priority: medium
>              Bug ID: 54478
>                  CC: website@global.libreoffice.org
>            Assignee: libreoffice-bugs@lists.freedesktop.org
>             Summary: Clarity&  Grammar issue on front page of
>                      LibreOffice.org
>            Severity: normal
>      Classification: Unclassified
>                  OS: All
>            Reporter: write2david@gmail.com
>            Hardware: Other
>              Status: NEW
>             Version: unspecified
>           Component: WWW
>             Product: LibreOffice
>      Ever confirmed: 1
>              Status: NEW
>
> This is a graphic that shows up on the homepage...
>
>
> https://www.libreoffice.org/assets/Shared/LibOWebsiteBannersDonationEnglish400px.png
>
>
> "operational running" doesn't make sense&  isn't proper grammar
>
> --- Comment #1 from Mas<airtime166@yahoo.com>  ---
> I agree, I am going to send this to the website team to update
>
> The image is located at the top right hand corner of
>
> http://www.libreoffice.org/

Considering it must fit the space allowed by the image (approx. 72 
characters), some suggestions:


"Consider donating to LibreOffice to fund our infrastructure and ..."

or

"Consider donating to LibreOffice to help fund our services and more!"

or

"Help us develop and grow LibreOffice with your generous donations ..."

or

"LibreOffice is growing with your generous contributions ..."

or

"Consider donating to LibreOffice development, infrastructure and ..."

Cheers,

Marc

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