Re: [libreoffice-website] Re: [Bug 54478] New: Clarity & Grammar issue on front page of LibreOffice.org

On Sun, Nov 4, 2012 at 11:43 PM, Marc Paré <marc@marcpare.com> wrote:

> Le 2012-11-03 13:26, bugzilla-daemon@freedesktop.**org<bugzilla-daemon@freedesktop.org>a écrit :
>
> > https://bugs.freedesktop.org/**show_bug.cgi?id=54478<https://bugs.freedesktop.org/show_bug.cgi?id=54478>
> >
> >            Priority: medium
> >              Bug ID: 54478
> >                  CC: website@global.libreoffice.org
> >            Assignee: 
> > libreoffice-bugs@lists.**freedesktop.org<libreoffice-bugs@lists.freedesktop.org>
> >             Summary: Clarity&  Grammar issue on front page of
> >                      LibreOffice.org
> >            Severity: normal
> >      Classification: Unclassified
> >                  OS: All
> >            Reporter: write2david@gmail.com
> >            Hardware: Other
> >              Status: NEW
> >             Version: unspecified
> >           Component: WWW
> >             Product: LibreOffice
> >      Ever confirmed: 1
> >              Status: NEW
> >
> > This is a graphic that shows up on the homepage...
> >
> >
> > https://www.libreoffice.org/**assets/Shared/**
> > LibOWebsiteBannersDonationEngl**ish400px.png<https://www.libreoffice.org/assets/Shared/LibOWebsiteBannersDonationEnglish400px.png>
> >
> >
> > "operational running" doesn't make sense&  isn't proper grammar
> >
> > --- Comment #1 from Mas<airtime166@yahoo.com>  ---
> > I agree, I am going to send this to the website team to update
> >
> > The image is located at the top right hand corner of
> >
> > http://www.libreoffice.org/
> Considering it must fit the space allowed by the image (approx. 72
> characters), some suggestions:
>
>
> "Consider donating to LibreOffice to fund our infrastructure and ..."
>
> or
>
> "Consider donating to LibreOffice to help fund our services and more!"
>
> or
>
> "Help us develop and grow LibreOffice with your generous donations ..."
>
> or
>
> "LibreOffice is growing with your generous contributions ..."
>
> or
>
> "Consider donating to LibreOffice development, infrastructure and ..."
>
> Cheers,
>
> Marc
>
> --
> Marc Paré
> Marc@MarcPare.com
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"Help us develop and grow LibreOffice with your generous donations ..."
 :)  This one sounds good


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