Re: [libreoffice-marketing] New Web Banner Proposals by Aleksandar (See)

Hi all,
Florian and Simon, thanks I am glad you like it.
I added two new files with different text like Simon asked:

http://wiki.documentfoundation.org/File:See_banner_ss3b.png
and
http://wiki.documentfoundation.org/cgi_img_auth.php/f/f0/See_banner_ss2b.png

Feel free to take a look at my wiki page:
http://wiki.documentfoundation.org/User:See
Once again, thanks for your feedback
Aleksandar

2011/9/26 Simon Phipps <simon@webmink.com>

> On 25 Sep 2011, at 21:49, Christoph Noack wrote:
>
> > Please check whether the banners are okay - marketing-wise. For
> > feedback, please use either the marketing list (reply to this mail) or
> > the design list. Since these banner closely follow our branding language
> > (see later), I suggest to replace the older proposals with these new
> > ones. So, please tell us whether everything fits (size, format,
> > claim, ...) ... or not ;-) Comments appreciated...
>
> These are good work - thanks, See.
>
> Personally, I would change the order of the words. I would write:
>
> Power-packed personal productivity suite
> Free, libre and open source for
> Windows, Macintosh and GNU/Linux
>
> That makes the core descriptive text together and makes it strongly
> alliterative, puts the differentiating values on their own line and means
> that each line has a distinctive purpose.
>
> Cheers,
>
> S.
>
>
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