Date: prev next · Thread: first prev next last
2011 Archives by date, by thread · List index



On 25 Sep 2011, at 21:49, Christoph Noack wrote:



Please check whether the banners are okay - marketing-wise. For
feedback, please use either the marketing list (reply to this mail) or
the design list. Since these banner closely follow our branding language
(see later), I suggest to replace the older proposals with these new
ones. So, please tell us whether everything fits (size, format,
claim, ...) ... or not ;-) Comments appreciated...

These are good work - thanks, See.

Personally, I would change the order of the words. I would write:

Power-packed personal productivity suite
Free, libre and open source for
Windows, Macintosh and GNU/Linux

That makes the core descriptive text together and makes it strongly alliterative, puts the 
differentiating values on their own line and means that each line has a distinctive purpose.

Cheers,

S.


-- 
Unsubscribe instructions: E-mail to marketing+help@global.libreoffice.org
Problems? http://www.libreoffice.org/get-help/mailing-lists/how-to-unsubscribe/
Posting guidelines + more: http://wiki.documentfoundation.org/Netiquette
List archive: http://listarchives.libreoffice.org/global/marketing/
All messages sent to this list will be publicly archived and cannot be deleted

Context


Privacy Policy | Impressum (Legal Info) | Copyright information: Unless otherwise specified, all text and images on this website are licensed under the Creative Commons Attribution-Share Alike 3.0 License. This does not include the source code of LibreOffice, which is licensed under the Mozilla Public License (MPLv2). "LibreOffice" and "The Document Foundation" are registered trademarks of their corresponding registered owners or are in actual use as trademarks in one or more countries. Their respective logos and icons are also subject to international copyright laws. Use thereof is explained in our trademark policy.