Re: [us-marketing] Re: LibreOffice Pamphlet

On Thu, Feb 10, 2011 at 7:54 AM, drew <drew@baseanswers.com> wrote:
> Hi Italo,
>
> How about this change to the above paragraphs - actually, I would want t
> change the wording for the SCALE specific show, lots of gov contractors
> in SoCal.
>
> On Thu, 2011-02-10 at 00:31 +0100, Italo Vignoli wrote:
> > The default document format of LibreOffice is Open Document Format
> > (ODF), which was approved by ISO on 30/11/2006 as an international
> > standard (ISO / IEC 26300).
> > Open Document Format is supported by the European Commission and many
> > governments worldwide and recommended as the preferred exchange
> > format
> > for office documents.
> > In addition, LibreOffice supports the document formats of many other
> > office suites for extended interoperability.
>
> so this section would read:
>
> The default document format of LibreOffice is Open Document Format
> (ODF), which was approved by ISO on 30/11/2006 as an international
> standard (ISO / IEC 26300).
>
> Open Document Format is recommended by numerous governments and
> non-governmental organizations worldwide, the European Commission,
> Indonesia and NATO to name but a few with policies supporting ODF
> as the preferred office document exchange format.
>
> In addition, LibreOffice supports document formats of many other office
> suites, from the most current to numerous legacy formats for extended
> interoperability.
>
>
> //drew

LinuxFest is mostly jes folks, no military. Only Militants for Liberty. B^)

I don't like the "to name but a few" cliche. How about "...worldwide,
including European Commission, Indonesia, NATO and others who have
policies..." or better "...worldwide, such as European Commission,
Indonesia, NATO, who have policies..." What we're trying to accomplish
here is to give weighty examples, not a list of all the gov's and NGOs
involved.

Carl

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