[us-marketing] Re: Next Decade Manifesto Video Loop

Le 2010-12-31 20:32, drew a écrit :
> On Fri, 2010-12-31 at 03:23 -0500, Marc Paré wrote:
>
> > Hi Drew:
> >
> > First loop:
> >
> > * First off I would remove the quotation marks. There is no need for
> > them here.
> > * Apply proper punctuation to all slides.
> > * At the start, "The Next Decade Manifesto" seems too fast, it is hard
> > to read. I would suggest slowing it down for legibility.
> > * The ending is a little choppy, but I think you know this already.
> >
> > Second loop:
> > * Add punctuation and remove quotation marks.
> > * The start (Document Foundation) is too choppy.
> > * The manifesto fly-in is good but IMO it stays static too long before
> > the window overlays start. I would shorten this part up a little.
> > * The overlay windows are great.
> > * End is choppy.
>
> Marc,
>
> Great - thanks for the feedback - I think loop_b is the winner here, but
> with the display window from _c and the timing of _a...ROFL..
>
> Happy new year by the way, Eh!
>
> Anyway - I'll take care of the punctuation. Will be working on a true
> final run for loop_b first, and next.
>
> In the meantime I've been working on the next set of files..see next
> email.
>
> Drew
Happy New Year to you and all as well.

Thanks for the work on the loop. It will be a great tool to have in our 
marketing tool kit.

Cheers

Marc


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