[us-marketing] Re: Next Decade Manifesto Video Loop

Le 2010-12-28 11:40, drew a écrit :
> On Tue, 2010-12-28 at 01:02 -0500, drew wrote:
> > On Tue, 2010-12-28 at 00:32 -0500, Marc Paré wrote:
>
> > > Hi Drew:
> > >
> > > Thanks for the improvements. I don't know if it is just me, but I would
> > > expect a person would be able to read comfortably the sentences on each
> > > slide before they disappear. This, I imagine, would be the ultimate
> > > test. There just does not seem to be any way for me to read any of the
> > > slides out loud before they disappear. Otherwise, the message is lost
> > > and the only valid page then becomes the final Manifesto page, which
> > > once again is quite long and disappears before one can read it out loud
> > > in its entirety.
> > >
> > > Maybe I my system is replaying the file back at a different speed?
> >
> > Hi,
> >
> > Nope, not just you on that - I've slowed it down even further - just
> > adding a little touch and will put new file(s) right up to the server,
> > tonight.
>
> Howdy Marc,
>
> Ran out of steam last night -
>
> OK - same file:
> http://oucv.org/libreoffice/tdf_ndm_loop.ogv.tar.gz
>
> Now you will find 3 videos in this:
>
> tdf_ndm_loop_final_a.ogv
> tdf_ndm_loop_final_b.ogv
> tdf_ndm_loop_final_c.ogv
>
> "final" in the names doesn't mean they are finished, just that these
> three basic files are what I want to work from for the actual finished
> work, or works.
>
> Thanks
>
> Drew

Hi Drew:

First loop:

* First off I would remove the quotation marks. There is no need for 
them here.
* Apply proper punctuation to all slides.
* At the start, "The Next Decade Manifesto" seems too fast, it is hard 
to read. I would suggest slowing it down for legibility.
* The ending is a little choppy, but I think you know this already.

Second loop:
* Add punctuation and remove quotation marks.
* The start (Document Foundation) is too choppy.
* The manifesto fly-in is good but IMO it stays static too long before 
the window overlays start. I would shorten this part up a little.
* The overlay windows are great.
* End is choppy.

Cheers

Marc


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