On Fri, 2010-12-31 at 03:23 -0500, Marc Paré wrote:
* First off I would remove the quotation marks. There is no need for
* Apply proper punctuation to all slides.
* At the start, "The Next Decade Manifesto" seems too fast, it is hard
to read. I would suggest slowing it down for legibility.
* The ending is a little choppy, but I think you know this already.
* Add punctuation and remove quotation marks.
* The start (Document Foundation) is too choppy.
* The manifesto fly-in is good but IMO it stays static too long before
the window overlays start. I would shorten this part up a little.
* The overlay windows are great.
* End is choppy.
Great - thanks for the feedback - I think loop_b is the winner here, but
with the display window from _c and the timing of _a...ROFL..
Happy new year by the way, Eh!
Anyway - I'll take care of the punctuation. Will be working on a true
final run for loop_b first, and next.
In the meantime I've been working on the next set of files..see next
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