[libreoffice-website] Re: homepage - great ! one word too much

Le 2013-02-07 16:23, Robinson Tryon a écrit :
> On Thu, Feb 7, 2013 at 4:04 PM, Cor Nouws<oolst@nouenoff.nl>  wrote:
> > Hi!
> >
> > Looks super!
> >
> > One line reads " The free office suite the community has been dreaming of
> > for twelve years. "
> >
> > I thought that had been (intended) to changed to   " The free office suite
> > the community has been dreaming for twelve years. " ?
>
> Cor Nouws -- your version seems much more poetic :-)
>
> I'd personally suggest "The free office suite the community has been
> dreaming about for twelve years". That seems to have the best flow in
> English.
>
> (but perhaps there's a nuance here that I'm missing?)

Nope, although, the text has already been discussed and the "dreaming 
of" agreed by the marketing higher ups. It also matches the PR release 
language.

Cheers,

Marc

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