Re: [libreoffice-website] homepage - great ! one word too much

On Thu, Feb 7, 2013 at 4:04 PM, Cor Nouws <oolst@nouenoff.nl> wrote:
> Hi!
>
> Looks super!
>
> One line reads " The free office suite the community has been dreaming of
> for twelve years. "
>
> I thought that had been (intended) to changed to   " The free office suite
> the community has been dreaming for twelve years. " ?

Cor Nouws -- your version seems much more poetic :-)

I'd personally suggest "The free office suite the community has been
dreaming about for twelve years". That seems to have the best flow in
English.

(but perhaps there's a nuance here that I'm missing?)

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