Re: [libreoffice-marketing] Re: Simple general LibreOffice flyer (WAS Re: Document Freedom Day Artwork)

On Thu, 2011-05-12 at 00:34 -0400, Marc Paré wrote:
> Hi Drew et al
>
> Sorry about the previous post. I hit the wrong button.
>
> Le 2011-05-11 18:21, drew a écrit :
> > Hi Tim, others
> >
> > Just to let you know - I've taken the tri-fold pamphlet you mention
> > there and reworked it, for the scatter branding. (That and I really did
> > not like the 'dental chart' on the inside..)
> >
> > You can find the results here:
> > http://lo-portal.us/temp/LibOPamphlet-may-11a.pdf
> >
> > (.odt is sitting next to it)
> >
> > If I don't get any 'could you change' type feedback, then I'll go ahead
> > and push this to the wiki (pdf and odt)
> >
> > Thanks
> >
> > Drew
>
> Thanks for doing this Drew. I think we need to review all of the 
> marketing tools and add the scatter wherever we can. It just jazzes up 
> everything really well.
>
> The only comments I have is p.1, 3rd panel The "Multi-language office 
> suite for" should be capitalized as it is a title and looks a little 
> unbalanced. 
> Would it be OK to put:
>
> Multi-Language Office Suite for
> Microsoft Window
> Gnu/Linux
> Mac OSX

Alright

> This would give it a triangular shape, lead the reader to the bottom 
> LibreOffice logo and I think it would look nicer to the eye.
>
> If we do this, then we would want to copy this list order on p.2, panel 
> 1 and have:
>
> "MS Windows, Gnu/Linux, Mac OS X"

and OK

There was also some feedback, via PM, from Tim - so here you go, with
all of the changes

http://lo-portal.us/temp/LibOPamphlet-may-11b.pdf


//drew


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