Re: [libreoffice-design] "Challenge Continues"-Banner

ok, i've reworked the banner, trying to consider all your suggestions,
but i didn't understand what's wrong with the spacing (point one in the
guidelines)

if you have futher suggestions, just tell me ;)


Am Samstag, den 26.02.2011, 23:22 +0100 schrieb Bernhard Dippold:
> Hi Tobias, all
>
> Tobias Bernard schrieb:
> > hi
> >
> > i don't know if we have enough fundraising banners yet,
>
> Of course not!
>
> But we need more different formats (as mentioned on the wiki page).
>
> > but here's one
> > more;)
>
> Thank you for your work!
> > http://wiki.documentfoundation.org/File:Libo-challengecontinues-banner-by-tobias.png
> > http://wiki.documentfoundation.org/File:Libo-banner-challenge-continues.svg
>
> I like the general impression and the color language of green and grey - 
> this perfectly fits to our branding in a way that doesn't mimic our website.
>
> But there are some points I have to comment:
>
> As the banner should be used on external sites, we  should remove the 
> subline "The Document Foundation" form the logo. This subline should be 
> reserved for our product and community, the websites 
> www.documentfoundation.org and www.libreoffice.org and officially 
> announced spokespeople.
>
> The word cloud is a great idea - I like it very much. But as the size of 
> the words differ not very much, it is hard to get any information from 
> that part. You have to follow the line of words - a bit tricky for the 
> average visitor of a website. The green words stand out quite well, but 
> "Help" and "Office" wont tell them not very much.
>
> Perhaps we could try to reduce the size of some words and emphasize 
> "create" (and "best", perhaps "office suite" too) by relative size and / 
> or color.
>
> With regards to the symbol I'd ask you to have a look at the branding 
> guidelines:
> http://wiki.documentfoundation.org/Marketing/Branding#Guidelines_and_Best_Practices
>
> (especially the first and fifth entry about whitespace and elements 
> inside the symbol).
>
> But as I already mentioned: The general impression is great. It might 
> become the basis for a long-term banner to be used by marketing and web 
> representation.
>
> Best regards
>
> Bernhard
> > greetings
> > tobias
> >
> > ps: why does the the svg file have such an ugly preview?



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