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Hi Drew, Marc, all

drew schrieb:

Well over an early coffee, I went ahead and merged Italo's comments into
Marc's latest on the wiki, and added one more graphic - thought maybe an
actual logo, the contemporary style might be nice, and it balances out
the columns when opened wide, IMO.

So draft 3 for the show specific pamphlet:

It's hard to keep in pace with you guys - great work!

From my POV this pamphlet fits very well with the Branding Guidelines, so no need to change it.

Nevertheless some thoughts...
(you know me - can't admit that some work is just perfect ;-) )

You added the Web and Chart icons to the graphic on the second page.

Why did you leave out Macro?

I would not suggest to promote Writer/Web actively - it has not been worked on for years and I didn't hear any positive reaction during the same time.

The Base icon on page 1 seems to be positioned slightly too low - leading to a fifth indented line, while all the other app's show four of them.

I don't know if you want to mention Chart on the first page too - perhaps a problem of space.

Speaking of "six feature-rich applications" directly below an image showing nine document icons looks a bit strange to me.

Perhaps an image showing the 6 applications in a star-like positioning indicating their inter-relationship might be an idea...

And one point to the text content: Under "The LibreOffice Project" (as "project" is a task leading to an end in my understanding I'd prefer "Community") there is more than twice as much text about the product as about the community - in fact, invitation to join us is the weakest position in the entire pamphlet IMHO (of course it's user-related, but showing them a way to be involved in a relevant way - possibly leading to better inclusion of their interests in community and product - might be important too).

As said - no reason to modify the pamphlet: Just some input for the case you want to keep on working on it ...

Best regards


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