[us-marketing] Re: [libreoffice-design] Re: [en] NA-Comm-DVD Label

On Thu, 2011-04-21 at 11:10 -0400, Marc Paré wrote:
> Le 2011-04-21 10:34, drew a écrit :
> > On Thu, 2011-04-21 at 10:30 -0400, Marc Paré wrote:
> > > Le 2011-04-20 21:20, drew a écrit :
> > > > Hi,
> > > >
> > > > One more change to the label for the NA-Comm-DVD.
> > > >
> > > > Addressed some concerns on trademark, from the US mktg ml.
> > > >
> > > > Swapped SVG logo for one a bit more descriptive and moved a few things
> > > > around, per Marc's comments.
> > > >
> > > > Removed overall green frame, except spine and updated the scatter
> > > > element to give it much more prominence.
> > > >
> > > > Softened the sactter-esque watermark on back cover, and adjusted other
> > > > elements.
> > > >
> > > > Updated the file on the wiki:
> > > > http://wiki.documentfoundation.org/Existing_Designs#Case
> > > >
> > > > Thanks
> > > >
> > > > Drew
> > >
> > > Thanks for update Drew. I was just wondering, what is the purpose of the
> > > black dot under "English". Should this be erased?
> >
> > huh - a beauty mark perhaps...*chuckle*...yeah, will excise that.
>
> Thanks again for the excellent work on the label. Looks great! It will 
> make for a great template for other groups if they wish to adopt the 
> same label. I really like the scatter on the label
>
> The only other criticism I would have is the slogan. I would suggest 
> moving the slogan moved beneath the LibreOffice title on the back page. 

<snip>

> What do you think?

Hi Marc,

Did that, and the slogan just kept wanting to move south...so I
accommodated it.

After that, it just yelled at me to do something with the front...so I
listened again.

Finally, the ODF logo screamed so I borrowed from here and there, did a
little aggregating and a little touch with the airbrush tool and
well..see for yourself.

http://wiki.documentfoundation.org/Existing_Designs#Case

The source file is at:
http://lo-portal.us/temp/na-dvd-case-04-11-22c.xcf

"What do you think?" -> I think this is looking damned good now, thanks
to all feedback. Also, that I need to move on to a jewel case layout.

Best wishes,

Drew


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