Re: [libreoffice-marketing] Flyer about LibreOffice

Hi :)
I didn't notice the detail of the wording in that much depth.  Most people wont.  

I guess the paragraph that is fully justified could be tweaked to avoid the huge spread of some of 
the words.  In the 1st line it could be "LibreOffice! A comprehensive ..." or perhaps a comma 
instead of the "!" to avoid needing "is".  Either way  might be enough to pull "comprehensive" up 
to the 1st line if that is something worth doing.  

However, it neatly avoids making any false claims, gives a good overview and brief mention of key 
features.  Perfect.  :)

I can't imagine this flyer being folded neatly unless the folds are horizontal instead of the usual 
verticals.  Even then it would be quite tricky.  Also it might be quite heavy on ink but it looks 
great and draws attention.  I think these as flyers around the place and then a few of the 
gatefolds for handing out to people wanting intense detail?  
Regards from 
Tom :)  





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> From: Kracked_P_P---webmaster <webmaster@krackedpress.com>
> To: marketing@global.libreoffice.org 
> Sent: Friday, 26 July 2013, 15:09
> Subject: Re: [libreoffice-marketing] Flyer about LibreOffice
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> On 07/26/2013 07:39 AM, Tom Davies wrote:
> > Hi :)
> > WOW!!!  Really attractive! :)  Nice images.  Gives plenty of hints and teasing tasters to make 
> > people want to find out more by visiting the website you give.
> >
> > I can imagine people glancing at this and then visiting the website even if they lost the actual 
> > flyer itself.  I like the way you handle "the formats issue" by just quoting the ISO number and 
> > thus neatly avoiding any debate about competitors.  It's a bit large and officious compared to 
> > the friendliness of the rest of the flyer but i think taht is part of why it works so well.  I 
> > think this flyer will catch people's attention and move them onto the website
> >
> > Superb work!
> > Thanks and regards from
> > Tom :)
> >
> >
> >
> >
> >
> >
> > > ________________________________
> > > From: Eliane Domingos de Sousa <elianedomingos@libreoffice.org>
> > > To: marketing@global.libreoffice.org
> > > Sent: Thursday, 25 July 2013, 23:05
> > > Subject: [libreoffice-marketing] Flyer about LibreOffice
> > >
> > >
> > > Dear all,
> > >
> > > I prepared a flyer about LibreOffice for Braziland Itranslatedfor
> > > Englishto share with you.
> > >
> > > Feel free to use.
> > >
> > > SVG file: https://wiki.documentfoundation.org/File:Libreoffice-about-EN.svg
> > > JPG file: https://wiki.documentfoundation.org/File:Libreoffice-about-EN.jpg
> > >
> > > Best,
> > >
> > > -- 
> > > Eliane Domingos de Sousa
> > > Comunidade LibreOffice Brasil
> > > Brazilian LibreOffice Community
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