[libreoffice-marketing] Re: [ACTION ITEM] APPROVE New LibreOffice Brochure for official use (community version pending)

Hi Jean and Tim,

Le 07/03/13 01:44 PM, Jean Weber a écrit :
> Apologies for not commenting earlier, but I've been otherwise occupied.
>
> In my editorial opinion, the quotation marks around the names of the
> components (Writer, Draw, etc) are unnecessary and should be removed.

Thanks. Done.

> Also, some of the hyphenation and inline spacing looks poorly done.
> Otherwise, I like the concept and the design.

Yeh. LibreOffice has taken care of most of the hyphenation and other 
hyphenation was "tweaked by hand" (not many though).

Re: spacing ... always a problem when a document makes the use of 
justified text (watching out for rivers as well). It looks like 
LibreOffice, IMO, could do a better job at justified text, especially 
when dealing with the most popular form of tri-fold brochures. I am not 
sure if this would be possible. One easy way to close up the gaps is by 
adding/removing/rephrasing the text.

LibreOffice does a good job of ragged-right text. Not sure of ragged 
left, I guess the Arabic and Asian members would have to chime in on 
that one.

I have re-worked the text to ragged-right (left-justified) and have sent 
the versions to Tim for posting. It has fixed the spacing problem.

Could you have another peek once they are posted?

Cheers,

Marc



> --Jean



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