[libreoffice-marketing] Donation button problem on front page

The following bug has been open for far too long and needs to be 
addressed. As this is more of a marketing issue, could we all look at it 
and decide on the change. I will then make arrangements for the change 
or do the change myself.

Could we come to a decision soon as it shows on our front page and IMO 
does not leave visitors with a good impression?

Le 2012-11-03 13:26, bugzilla-daemon@freedesktop.org a écrit :
> https://bugs.freedesktop.org/show_bug.cgi?id=54478
>
>            Priority: medium
>              Bug ID: 54478
>                  CC: website@global.libreoffice.org
>            Assignee: libreoffice-bugs@lists.freedesktop.org
>             Summary: Clarity&  Grammar issue on front page of
>                      LibreOffice.org
>            Severity: normal
>      Classification: Unclassified
>                  OS: All
>            Reporter: write2david@gmail.com
>            Hardware: Other
>              Status: NEW
>             Version: unspecified
>           Component: WWW
>             Product: LibreOffice
>      Ever confirmed: 1
>              Status: NEW
>
> This is a graphic that shows up on the homepage...
>
>
> 
https://www.libreoffice.org/assets/Shared/LibOWebsiteBannersDonationEnglish400px.png
>
>
> "operational running" doesn't make sense&  isn't proper grammar
>
> --- Comment #1 from Mas<airtime166@yahoo.com>  ---
> I agree, I am going to send this to the website team to update
>
> The image is located at the top right hand corner of
>
> http://www.libreoffice.org/
>

Considering it must fit the space allowed by the image (approx. 72 
characters), some suggestions:


"Consider donating to LibreOffice to fund our infrastructure and ..."

or

"Consider donating to LibreOffice to help fund our services and more!"

or

"Help us develop and grow LibreOffice with your generous donations ..."

or

"LibreOffice is growing with your generous contributions ..."

or

"Consider donating to LibreOffice development, infrastructure and ..."

Cheers,

Marc

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