Re: [libreoffice-marketing] Extension website - broader publicity wanted

Hi :)

Another petty minor one i keep meaning to mention
"Developers invited to contribute their add-ons
Community-based review process ensures quality and reliability"

I think it should be
"Developers are invited to contribute their add-ons.
Community-based review process ensures quality and reliability."
2 full-stops and an "are".  The way it is written at the moment is kinda like 
business-speak. People probably haven't noticed they are missing as they are so 
obviously intended.  


Regards from
Tom :)




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From: Florian Effenberger <floeff@documentfoundation.org>
To: marketing@global.libreoffice.org
Sent: Tue, 30 August, 2011 10:54:26
Subject: Re: [libreoffice-marketing] Extension website - broader publicity 
wanted

Hi,

Florian Effenberger wrote on 2011-08-27 15:23:
> thanks for all your feedback! I tried to incorporate all changes, and
> here is the new draft:

I still have to check a few legal details before we can launch, so stay tuned :)

Florian

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