Re: [libreoffice-design] LibreOffice ad

Hi Andrew,

On Tue, Oct 4, 2011 at 6:22 AM, Andrew Pullins <android2772@gmail.com> wrote:
> Hi
>
> so like I said in reply to Aleksandar's banners email, I was inspired to
> make an advertisment by his* *Autumn Season banners[1]. so this is what came
> to my mind when I saw them. i do not want to make any one mad but I did make
> this in adobe flash. one I started it before I knew there was an opensource
> flash program. two I do not know or like the opensource program and have
> been using adobe flash on and off for some time. and C when this project is
> done this ad will be ran as files that every person on the internet can
> view.

There's something about the lettering at the bottom, that expands
off-screen that doesn't look quite right to me, personally. The eye is
mainly drawn to the bottom edge of the animation. And there are large
areas to the left and right that have no action or content at all,
making it a large graphic that seems kind of empty...

Well, at least, that was my own 2 cents... :-)

Could you maybe try some more iterations?

-- 
David Nelson

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