On 25 Sep 2011, at 21:49, Christoph Noack wrote:
Please check whether the banners are okay - marketing-wise. For
feedback, please use either the marketing list (reply to this mail) or
the design list. Since these banner closely follow our branding language
(see later), I suggest to replace the older proposals with these new
ones. So, please tell us whether everything fits (size, format,
claim, ...) ... or not ;-) Comments appreciated...
These are good work - thanks, See.
Personally, I would change the order of the words. I would write:
Power-packed personal productivity suite
Free, libre and open source for
Windows, Macintosh and GNU/Linux
That makes the core descriptive text together and makes it strongly alliterative, puts the
differentiating values on their own line and means that each line has a distinctive purpose.
Cheers,
S.
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