That is one approach..anyone else have a thought on that?
That is really outstanding work. I went to the webpage showing all previous
versions and it is impressive how the design just kept getting better with
I can only think of a few terribly minor nitpicks...
(1) In "Calculate, analyze and visually communicate" there is an extra
space before the word "visually" that should be removed.
(2) "Create simple diagrams to dynamic 3-D illustrations...": alternatively,
perhaps, "Create simple diagrams, dynamic 3-D illustrations..."
(3) "Base provides the integrated database access" might want to drop "the"
(4) "Create easy to difficult mathematical formulas with this great tool and
then you can paste it into your documents." alternatively, perhaps, "Create
simple or complex mathematical formulas with this versatile tool and paste
them into your documents."
But really, these are just nitpicks. There is such a thing as "gilding the
lily" and in my opinion this DVD cover is very handsome and smart looking
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