[libreoffice-website] Fwd: [libreoffice-documentation] Volunteer to Proofread (Starting with the website.)

This was my idea for the "Help" pages (that I mentioned on /documentation),
just a general template. I will be able to work on it later this evening,
tell me what you all think.

---------- Forwarded message ----------
From: Clayton Walker <blender3dartist@gmail.com>
Date: Sun, Jan 30, 2011 at 8:06 PM
Subject: Re: [libreoffice-documentation] Volunteer to Proofread (Starting
with the website.)
To: documentation@libreoffice.org


How about this format:
(Note that there will be consistences across the pages, with more specific
answers towards the bottom, ranked by importance. I will probably be keeping
the double bullet point feature for the explanation of the software. Or
perhaps only mention the specific pieces that are relevant to that user?)

LibreOffice boasts many *input specific boast here (i.e.
usable/stable/easy/complete/compatible)* features for *input user type
here".

   - LibreOffice comes as a complete office suite, including
   - A word processor
   - A presenator
   - etc...
   - LibreOffice is free etc
   - LibreOffice blah blah blah

~Fin

-Clayto(w)n Walker

On Sun, Jan 30, 2011 at 7:50 PM, Clayton Walker
<blender3dartist@gmail.com>wrote:

> Awesome. Yes, I got all of the messages, however I did the fixes first.
> Then for some reason went on and started correcting the layout. Then
> bastardized it, but forgot to make it uniform (I would be looking at all of
> those pages, choosing the best layout, and applying it to all of them from
> there.) Also, the problem is redundancy. I would prefer it if all of the
> pages weren't the same, except for the business page have one point that
> business related, and one for home users, etc.
>
> Also, regarding the typo, for some reason I couldn't find a spell checker
> just in case. Have I overlooked something?
>
>
> On Sun, Jan 30, 2011 at 7:44 PM, David Nelson <commerce@traduction.biz>wrote:
>
> > Hi Clayton, :-)
> >
> > On Mon, Jan 31, 2011 at 02:30, Clayton Walker <blender3dartist@gmail.com>
> > wrote:
> > > Also, did anybody get my suggested publishing? And is there any sort
> > > of collaboration settings as well?
> >
> > I looked at your changes. They look fine. Feel free to develop the
> > content further? Expand a bit? I did see a typo, but corrected it...
> > ;-)
> > You want to check for any more of those? If possible, try and avoid
> > line breaks and prefer using a full new paragraph?
> >
> > I see you didn't take account of Jaxson's comments regarding the
> > application names? Did you see his suggestions in this thread? Maybe
> > fix that?
> >
> > I upgraded your permissions to Publisher. You can now hit "Save and
> > Publish" and we'll all get an email notification of your publication.
> >
> > HTH. ;-)
> >
> > David Nelson
> >
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