Re: [libreoffice-marketing] LibreOffice download page: updating the text

Hi Mike, 

Sounds good! 

I was thinking if we could polish it even more:


Newer branch (currently 24.2):
The latest version with all the newest features and improvements. Perfect for tech enthusiasts and 
early adopters.

Older branch (currently 7.6):
Our previous stable release, thoroughly tested and still supported. Recommended for business 
deployments seeking long-term stability and support from our ecosystem.


So it's almost the same and maintains the key points of the original, but it's maybe improving 
readability a bit, as well as emphasizing the intended audiences for each branch.

Cheers,
Asja







    On Wednesday, June 12, 2024 at 03:00:49 PM GMT+2, Clocked Modular <boudi@clocked.eu> wrote:  
 
 Hi Mike,

Would be an improvement, indeed.

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On Wed, Jun 12, 2024 at 2:52 PM Mike Saunders <
mike.saunders@documentfoundation.org> wrote:

> Hi everyone,
>
> Check out the two boxes on the download page, for (currently) the
> LibreOffice 24.2 and 7.6 branches:
>
> https://www.libreoffice.org/download/download-libreoffice/
>
> We've heard from users on social media and at our info@ and download@
> addresses that they're confused which version to choose, or believe the
> 24.2 branch isn't stable etc. Obviously both branches are stable (in the
> sense that they don't change radically, and only receive bug and
> security fixes -- no new features in the middle of the branch).
>
> So let's look at updating the text for clarity! My initial suggestion:
>
>
> Newer branch (currently 24.2): The very latest version, with lots of new
> features and improvements.
>
> Older branch (currently 7.6): Our previous release, which we are still
> supporting. For business deployments, we strongly recommend getting
> long-term supported versions from our ecosystem.
>
>
> What do you think? Bear in mind that we want to keep the text short and
> snappy here!
>
> --
> Mike Saunders, Marketing and Community Coordinator
> The Document Foundation
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