Re: [libreoffice-marketing] New video: LibreOffice general promo

Le 2024-06-04 à 04 h 40, Mike Saunders a écrit :
> Hi everyone,
>
> Thanks to the feedback from Marc Pare, Franco, Nigel Verity and Gorjan 
> Lakaliski on the mailing list and in the Telegram group, here's an 
> updated version of the video, with some of the suggestions included. 
> It's still unlisted, so please don't share until it's public!
>
> https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=lrpZDDaO068
>
> I'd like to make it public in the next few days, and promote it, with 
> a PeerTube version too. So let's not make any big changes now (we can 
> always make an updated version later).
>
> Thanks for the feedback and suggestions 😊
>
> Mike
Hi Mike, looks good!

I would suggest to capitalize the "P" on the "Word processor" --> "Word 
Processor" as it is more of a title than that of part of a sentence.

Thanks for the video creation - it is very appealing.

Marc

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