Re: [libreoffice-marketing] Website Wording

Great question.... I am always of the persuasion that less is more.  We
want the key takeaways clearly understood and reiterated    If they can
come away with the key items we did a good job with the content..... if we
overwhelm them with content and they forget the 3-4 key takeaways then....

Cheers,

Marc


On Sun, Dec 15, 2013 at 5:46 AM, Charles-H. Schulz <
charles.schulz@documentfoundation.org> wrote:

> Hi,
>
> As I'm seriously getting into drafting content on the future website
> pages (not much to see now it's all in draft mode), I wanted to ask a
> broad question here: do we want to generally have shorter, but clearer
> texts or continue with the kind of texts we have on our current website?
>
> Pros for shorter texts:
> - fits better on a page, looks better
> - gets the right information or the main one instantly
>
> Cons:
> - not all the information is there
>
> Feedback welcome,
>
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