Re: [libreoffice-marketing] LibO advert #2 with link

Hi Tom, Dave, all,

thanks for working on this part of our marketing!

Tom Davies schrieb:
> Hi :)
>
> I have a few suggestions but how close is this to completion?  Note that it is
> always easier to criticise than to create.  I think the advert is good work
> despite these points ...

Same for me - but if you re-iterate the advertisement, please consider 
the following points too:

The shading behind the LibO logo in the right upper corner reduces it's 
readability (and inside the symbol there shouldn't be any shading 
visible, because it is not empty).
I could imagine that - if you want it to stand out like the photo - it 
might work better, if you had a white background behind the logo with 
the background getting the shading.

(It looks like the distance between symbol and text is not the one we 
use in our actual "initial branding" [1])

Just providing a draft of what I mean:

http://wiki.documentfoundation.org/cgi_img_auth.php/9/99/LibreOffice_Logo_with_background.svg

And if you could use the official logo from [2] for the representation 
in the text (there is a text based version if you need it) it would keep 
the original color, bold/regular representation and character spacing.

Accompanying text can use the Vegur font, so it would stay consistent.

Best regards

Bernhard

[1]: http://wiki.documentfoundation.org/Marketing/Branding

[2]: 
http://wiki.documentfoundation.org/File:LibreOffice-Initial-Artwork-Logo.svg

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