I completed my pass of 0203WG3-WorkingWithText.odt, but I still cannot Update it! So please take heed that I have a lot of work on this that is in limbo, and don't edit the same file.
I found a few things that need attention (not counting graphics updates), and since the document is "all or nothing" I'll kick it back to Drafts for someone to take a look at the indicated notes. Other changes I've made myself, which are either purely copy editing or based on the behavior I'm seeing. Everything's under "Record Changes".
I would think that we should all have "Changes" and "Comments" visible when working on any of this stuff, as a matter of course.