I have modified the text and (I think) repositioned the pictures. The result
has been submitted for publication. I assume someone with "publish"
permission will deal with it.
I'm not entirely happy with the way it came out, but I ran out of time to
try to figure out how to deal better with the pictures. Although I looked at
the code used on the Windows page, which is different from that used on the
Mac page, I didn't attempt to make major changes; I'd need to do more study
and fiddling to understand it well enough to do that. Also, I didn't add all
the pictures I had in my document, because I didn't have time to study the
page about uploading and dealing with pictures, and those pictures were not
essential to the instructions. I think they are nice-to-haves for new Mac
users.
Having done this page, I don't think I will get very involved in website
work. Learning to use Silverlight AND Alfresco AND LibreOffice itself is
overloading my brain. So I'll concentrate my limited time and brainpower
on the user guides and only jump into website work occasionally to help on
specific needs.
Hal