Hello Jean, Dan and Rob,
I have compared chapter 1 before and after being edited by Jean. I have
accepted all the changes. I have adjusted some screenshots so that they
meet the current standard (For example on page 24, I have cropped the
figure so that it does not include the german title). I have placed the
chapter in Published folder and updated the spreadsheet.
To Jean:
I have added the name of the databases Media without macros and media with
macros to the preface. I dit not used track changes as the change was
necessary and the database name should be mentioned there.
To Dan:
Jean has commented that it would be too complicated to name the table
"Athletes". He has changed the sentences accordingly so that the readers
can understand that starters anre athletes. I agree with him.
I have adjusted the screenshots that you commented on so that they meet the
current standard (For example on page 24, I have cropped the figure so that
it does not include the german title.
To Rob:
I have adjusted the screenshots but if you want you can take the chapter
from the published, replace the screenshots and put it back there and
inform the mailing list.But I would advice you to skip chapter 1 as there
are not many needs of screenshot replacement and I have adjusted all of the
needed ones.
To Everybody:
There is a date problem. I think Jean being from Australia has added 29th
Feb to the date in the Spreadsheet but it is 28th in India (where I live)
at time of writing this mail. I think we should not use local dates and use
the Universal time.
Pulkit Krishna