I have completed a first review of chapter 2 and returned the file to the
Feedback folder, including tracked changes and embedded comments. I have
checked it against 6.4 builds for both Linux and Windows installations. I
hope the changes and queries are helpful.
I recommend that Jean has a chance to review my changes and comments before
anybody else takes the chapter for a second review (and have added a
comment accordingly to the tracking spreadsheet).
I intend to do a final check tomorrow against a macOS installation for
completeness.
Regards,
Steve