Hi Peter
I've just taken a quick look at your chapter and agree that Tango is not too good an icon set. I've expressed the same opinion to Jean and I hope the decision will be made to stay with Galaxy.
With regards to the chapter you've just posted, the copyright page carries the date range 'to 2012'. I've been changing this to 2013.
Jean is going to make a decision on how we refer to file types: .odt, *.odt, .ODT, or just ODT etc. This so we have a consistent presentation in the docs.
I only wanted to look at the document to see your graphics to see if they reinforced my thoughts on the Tango set, I've not done a read-through so can't comment further.
Oh! Speaking of comments. The new Writer allows you to select a range of text and add a comment to it. With my Win XP set-up, on the files in which I did this as a reminder for when I returned to them, LO could not open them, returning a read error. Watch out for that. Could only be Windows.
Regards
JohnS