John,
I have accepted all your changes in Chapter 2. I have also done some
reformatting (to improve page breaks) and published the file.
http://www.odfauthors.org/libreoffice/english/writer-guide/published-lo-3.6
I have accepted your revisions in Chapter 3 and left one question and
one comment in the file. It's in Feedback.
http://www.odfauthors.org/libreoffice/english/writer-guide/feedback/wg3.6-ch3-text/view
--Jean