Writer Guide chapter 1

Hi Jean.
You caught most of my rework. There are a few other points, so I've updated the file and left comments for your consideration. Else all's good.

Regards
JohnS

Revised Chapter 1 is in Feedback; see what you think.
I've updated the task list on wiki to show you as having checked out
Chapters 2 & 3.
I've asked Jamie what the status of Ch4 is.
Which chapter should I look at next -- 5?

Good to see you ripping through this book.

--Jean

Hi Jean.
I've looked at Chapters two and three again so they should be good to go.

I've revisited Chapter 1. Other than a couple of tiny errors I'd missed it looks fine.

Cheers
JohnS

Hi Jean, John, and all,

I uploaded Chapter 4 tonight. This is a revision based on John's initial
review.

Thanks again John. Would you like me to do a peer review of any of your
chapters?

Jamie