This is hugely improved from the first draft but contains a lot of false references.
p.207. Caution. I think this should be a note.
p.215. Creating a database form. Could the first sentence read "a form is a front end for data entry, editing and display"? Forms are often used for display purposes, especially forms with subforms.
p.223. 1) "Make sure the cursor is in", not "in in".
p.224. Step 10 should be Step 9.
6)b) "I have done..."
p.225. Step 11 should be Step 10.
p.228. View a table's data. ASCII quote.
p.229. Some of the steps... "Some" in wrong font.
p.232. Bottom line. Figure 221 actually ahows empty fields. To me it looks identical to 211.
p.236. Fig 223 should be Fig 224.
"and drag the..." drag the what?
p.237. Figure numbers are wrong. I think this should read "Figure 228 contains the Fuel table with my entries; the query results based on the fuel table are in Figure 229."
p.238. Figure 215 should be Figure 230.
p.239. Figure 210 should be Figures 233-235.
p.240. Figure 209 should be Figure 227.
Figure 206 should be Figure 236.
Figure 204 should be Figure 237. This figure contains the word "Quanity" as an alias.
Figure 203 should be Figure 238.
Figure 202 should be Figure 239.
Figure 196 should be Figure 240.
p.242. Figure 194 on p.214. Not sure what figure he means but I don't think it's this one.
p.243. Step 3: Grouping. Heading at bottom of page looks wrong.