[libreoffice-l10n] Suggestion + little mistake for bh guide

Hello all,
I've seen on page 29 of the bh guide 3.5 that, while talking about the 
jdbc connection in the previous pages, at a certain point there's a 
referring to the direct connection to a mysql db; as this passage is not 
so clear (at least to me), isn't it better (for future guides of course) 
to add a statement (more or less) like the following?

"...but it does give a visible indication of the direct connection." -> 
"...but it does give a visible indication in case of a direct 
connection, using a native MySQL connector (see page 24)."


Last... there is a little mistake on page 24:

"...for versions of LibreOffice from 3.5 onwads..." -> "...for versions 
of LibreOffice from 3.5 onwards..."

It's the same also in the 4.0 bh guide.

Thank you! :)

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